SkaterPunk2011

To me it seemed as if you were describing a flower that was beautiful and didn't want to ruin. I'm probably wrong but those of more intellectual malfunctions tend to ...

Well thanks so much SimonCowellLover now I love it more. I used your suggestion to create a longer more dramatic end. Enjoy.

I rather loved it. It was a bit rushed, but it wasnt confusing to follow and it had a bit of humor to it. I hope all goes well with ...

Was a bit confusing at first, but when i figured out what it meant it was actually kind of interesting.

Very cute! Keep it up

Most people don't appreciate animal photography, but i truely thought those pictures were adorable. The last one was my favorite. Keep it up:D

I loved the ending, it sends a very powerful message, keep writing i love your work :D Keep it up:D:D

Stone Cold His hands felt of concrete, as they traced along my back. Shivers of cold ran down my spine. Trying to gasp for the air slipping away. Holding on ...

Generally clapping out the syllables of the words gives children the capability of figuring up how many syllables are in each word they use, then it just takes simple addition ...

In my opinion, poetry comes from the heart. Most people use it as a way to let emotions out. Some people think of poetry as rhyming or Dr. Seuss. But ...

It was a very catchy poem indeed. Although there are some puncuation errors that made it some what difficult to follow along it had a good basic theme. I knew ...

The poem flowed very well and it was funny indeed. Writing poetry that comes from real experiences tends to be the most entertaining to read. Keep up the good work.

Though it may seem a bit bland, i understand your concept, i rather enjoyed reading it. It was fresh and enlightening. In my opinion, you have true talent. It also ...

I agree with the others, i really wish i could actually hear the song. Sounds great Alice! I love all of your work, and i hope you keep it up. ...

I rather enjoyed reading this poem, it takes slow reading to catch it but it was well worth it. Keep Writing :D