SkaterPunk2011

Hello there! It has been a long time since I've posted anything so I decided to show you guys my latest hobby! :) I helped out a local band by ...

My 2008 Final Exam Project

Dear Abandonment, I miss the way things once were, the way life use to be. Before the world came crashing down, an ending to your loving fantasy. Your lips have ...

Good Work! I loved it. Well written, great discriptions, amazing flow, and it wasn't to cliche. The title is great to. Thumbs up!! Keep Writing.:)

Okay, I thought it flowed really well for the most part. There were a few spelling errors and some punctuation flaws; but i thought it was really well written. It ...

Painted Phenomenon Beauty was never a choice, Love was never to be. For I was born to be a monster, Scarred as nothing but defeat. I hide behind this painted ...

*removed* You cannot vote for yourself.

I normally don't read this type of poetry, but actually i liked it. It flowed well and it had meaning. my favorite line was this one right here. we left ...

Me like. I want to actually hear these songs. Sound very good indeed. Keep writing i love to read them :D! Keep it up!

It was a really interesting poem I really like it. Normally I don't read these types of poems but it has a powerful stand point. My only small suggestion is, ...

Camellias As I lay in my field of camellias, I think about the years I've wasted. Captivated by your loving touch, a lullaby for a heartrending finish. Sing to me, ...

Thank you for your request miyaviloves, after reading through this piece one more time i realized it didnt make sense so i replaced kisses me with passion, protects me from ...

Shadows of Obscurity Moonlight creeps over the horizon. Darkness evokes all that is bright. I linger into the shadows, to find my prince of night. He possesses all that keeps ...

Altough there were some few minor puncuation errors in the beginning; the flowing was great, it was romantic and you could tell it was written on behalf of a person ...

Well not much to critique here, it flows well, sounds great, and a very talented write who writes it. Bravo on a job well done. I can't wait to read ...