SisterItaly

Kayta At this rate Katya was going to get drunk off shots in no time. She gazed around the room, when Kayta got drunk, she got wild, and Kayta gone ...

I like it! Good job Craftyness! Kinda isn't a word, it's slang, use kind of. Could use some periods, not just ellipses and commas. Crunch Crunch Crunch should be > ...

No punctuation! , and . show when to stop and take a breath, and are needed. Questions end with ? I didn't find any spelling mistakes... I like this keep ...

Daxter, and I tried the idea, but it died...

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Pretty colors *stares at colors* and a smiley! 9.8/10

Awww I hope you do :(

ultra it was claimed

Katya - My attempt at third person Katya walked into the bar, confident as usual. From what she could see there was a very unusual group of characters here. She ...

Katya "Well hello there mister ninja, can I offer you my... services?" What would your charrie do if they worked for a contract killing service and their true identidy was ...

Riecey called the mole

Name: Katya Gender: Female Age: 27 Cliche: Drama Queen Agency: The Cliches Personality: She's not one to pick a fight, let alone be in one. She'd rather seduce her victems ...

I misspelled poem, I was such a noob : P

MIKA I followed my sister, deeper into the rain forest. She moves a lot faster then me, but at least I wasn't making enough noise to wake up the dead. ...

Thank you for all the lovely reviews! After doing some reviewing myself I became to lazy to edit this... longer reviews for you! *But luckily I did do a spellcheck!* ...