SishBee

I left that morning. I took my quiver and bow and two small knives which I had stuck into my boots. I had changed into my travelling clothes; thick winter ...

I like the second and third photo but the others were a little boring. The second was unusual and the slight change in contrast brought out the red in the ...

Nope, it's not Susan. Umm, I'm guessing... Harry. ~SishBee~ x

Ok, there were a couple of typo's... Then I feel his hol[s]l[/s]y glow, Treating my wounds on the way to the hospital. Right, I understand the message you are trying ...

Kore? ^ Because that's the other Greek name for Demeter. Hobbies: Reading, walking, rock climbing, drums, playing on the wii!!! Place: UK (a really small village) Personality: sarcastic, bubbly, energ

Hey, I agree with Kris, that your structure is a little disjointed. That does emphasise the quite turmoil which is taking place in the park but it does make some ...

Hey, As far as I could see, there were only two gramatical errors: The sharp end branches shook amber leaves (should this be sharp ended, or sharpened?) and Instead a ...

The (Narrator) At the beginning, We were there. After we had served our time, They arrived. And then, for a while, there was peace. Quiet and calm. Then, You imposed ...

I completely agree. That is ridiculous! I would just like to point out that not all of us from the West Midlands are that stupid! Poor dog. ~SishBee~ x

Name: Atalanta Age: 17 Nationality: Greek Appearance: Somewhat androgynous but pretty. Medium height and slim. Light brown hair, pale skin and green eyes. Personality: Outgoing and clever she acts mor

Name: Ashley Baits (Ash) Age: 27 Gender: female Status: Security (she wonders around the tables watching for anyone cheating) History: Her father was a psycologist and died when she was ...

Can I just say that this was a pleasure to read (dispite the violence). It is wonderfully descriptive and you choose your words perfectly. If I had one criticism it ...

I don't think it was too long. You used short sentences and short paragraphs to contrast with the length of the piece which stopped the length being a problem. The ...

I really liked this piece, I thought you coveyed your emotions very well and I could tell you put a lot into this. The slightly random rhyme scheme worked well ...

[Ray] After being introduced to Kai she just couldn't help but ask, "Sorry if this seems rude but why do you have fox ears and a tail?" Kai smiled "My ...