SishBee

Hey! Umm, it explains what Fin did to her in part one... Just thought I would let you know! :) ~SishBee~ x

Wow! That is really good! please could you write some more, if you're stuck for ideas, perhaps you could do someting from Ammon's point of view so that we can ...

“Halee!” She looked up and, realizing who I was, immediately took off in the opposite direction. I half thought about not following her, but then I pulled myself together and ...

Kalyee flew with me to the ground nest and then left without even looking at me. I raised an eyebrow at her back but then shook my head and walked ...

Hey! Thanks for the tips, i will take those on board and see what i can do. In answer to your questions, the reason he didn't know who Kalyee was ...

That was really good... one question, i didn't quite get the status thing very well, is a guardian higher than an instructor or the other way around...? Anyway, great story! ...

Alya was silent as we flew back to the lookout. I had a smile on my face. When we got there, she sat down and I picked up my bow ...

WOW! That is really good! ahem, right... first of all I liked the way that time was still not entirely controllable, he didn't know where he would end up next. ...

Hey! I LOVE your avatar! Lol! I am quite new too but i welcome you to the site and i am sure you will settle in fine. PM me if ...

The words don't have to mean anything to us, just something a Roman may have said when he subbed his toe for example! :) Thanks! ~SishBee~ x

You were right about this being part of a chapter, so if you want i will post the next part, the chapter was quite long so I cut it in ...

The sun was beginning to set, so I put my hands up to shield my eyes from the sharp light. My watch wasn’t over until the sun had completely set. ...

Hey! If anyone knows any Latin curses or anything along those lines could you let me know... I am lost when it comes to latin! Thanks again! ~SishBee~ x

Wow that is long! I am quite proud of you for writing something i managed to keep interested in the whole way through. Okay... I am not sure what the ...

It is good to see a classical story *aplaudes* but i am slightly confused as to how Icarus (the boy who flew too close to the sun and is drowned) ...