SishBee

More water. Just what I had always wanted. I fought the urge to run in the oposite direction away from the small wooden boat, which I had noticed sported at ...

Today just gets better and better. Now I am stuck on an island with an alcoholic elf, a murderous fairy and... well Tas. The girl, Allynne, was about to eat ...

Thank you for the crit, by the way the leather blanket is in fact his wing, but she doesn't know that he has them yet, so it would probably feel ...

She called it a box because she is hidden inside a crate, she can't see the room outside it. Thanks for the comment though, I will try and work on ...

I woke up slowly. Every bit of my body ached. I decided not to move. As my surroundings came into focus, I tried to sit up. I was in some ...

* Perfect. Another Fairy, that was all I needed right now and to top it all off, it was the infamous Tas. How kind the world is to some of ...

Yep! Those characters are all fine by me. Now all everyone has to is start writing the story! I'll continue my bit to keep it flowing... * The door slammed ...

Wow Pol!!! write the next bit quick!!!!!! I couldn't find any errors but I was so engrossed in the story I wasn't checking really properly :) Write more.....NOW! ~SishBee~ x

Name: Tave Gender: Female Age: 17 Species: Half fairy (not a storybook fairy by the way) Looks: Blonde hair with red streaks, purple eyes Personality: Not very sociable, hates water ...

The Captain isn't stood next to the door, he walks across the deck towards him. Oh and if you mean the bit where he is worried about someone listening at ...

She was still lying there in the same position I had left her. I reached down and brushed away a piece of sodden hair from her cheek. Her skin was ...

This was the story of Winstone and Gertrude Jones....(sumerises entire novel)... and then they died. Ah! I loved the Ron and Hermione one!!! ~SishBee~ x

hmmm, I agree with stirly, I think some of the language she uses is a little grown up for a six year old, although i liked the idea of her ...

I woke up in the dark. I sat up and stretched my stiff limbs. I shook off the remaining tendrils of sleep and groped around in the dark for my ...

The sounds a screams could easily be heard now even across the waters. Should be The sounds OF screams... Other than that, keep going! v.v.v.v.v.v. good! Interesting plot developing! Keep ...