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Re: Six Word Stories
It's so nice to see people still experimenting with writing! I really enjoyed reading these and please keep it up! Sish
Jun 11, 2011 -
Re: Imaginary story
Hi! I really liked the concept behind this story and you used the short story technique very well. Couple of pointers: when you are writing numbers, you should write them ...
Jun 11, 2011 -
Re: Experiments in Clockwork (Not Started | Accepting)
Name: Holly Vanders Age: 28 Gender: Female Group: Subject Appearance: Average height, average build, has long light brown hair which she keeps in a plait. Her eyes are grey and ...
Jun 6, 2011 -
Re: Experiments in Clockwork (Not Started | Accepting)
Hey! Can I reserve a spot for a female subject please? I'll put up a profile asap. Cheers!
Jun 1, 2011 -
Re: The Perfect Voyage 2 *Full | Dead*
Name: Marcus Green Age: 38 Gender: Male Appearance: Tall and slightly skinny for his height. He has dark brown hair which is gelled back (if any of you know who ...
May 22, 2011 -
Re: Stalking My Stalker
Awesome! Although I don't think you need the "and" in the second to last line. I absolutely loved this poem, it's good to see a bit of comedy in poetry. ...
May 13, 2011 -
Re: How to escape with a fleeing llama -- the survival guide
This looked awesome, so I thought I might see if I could revive it at all... Walnut I had been tracking the monkey for days, trying to document its behaviour ...
Apr 25, 2011 -
Re: A Softer World
Some of these are really good, you have a very good eye for movement in pictures. The only one I didn't like was the dog one, simply because, it wasn't ...
Jan 16, 2010 -
Re: Bailey in Ia Window
This is really good, especially given its an animal, and I know how hard those are to photograph! So you have done a really good job. Just out of interest, ...
Jan 15, 2010 -
Re: Heroes
I am a baddie... I'm still trying to kill you, not help you. Last thing that happened to me was my character feinted.
Feb 9, 2009 -
Re: Primal Oblivion
Sian She stared back at the Djinn. "How long will it take for Leo to recover fully?" she asked slowly. Ahihud shrugged, "He used up a lot of his power ...
Feb 9, 2009 -
Re: Heroes
Hooray! It's back! Ok, so where do we go from?
Feb 8, 2009 -
Re: Primal Oblivion
Sian She didn't like the look of this stranger. And with Leo in his current state, they were at a disadvantage. She looked him up and down coldly. He caught ...
Feb 6, 2009 -
Re: Primal Oblivion
I meant, no one in the little group I'm in. Hence why I am stranded :)... I just realized how 'damsel-in-distress' that sounded!
Feb 5, 2009 -
Re: Primal Oblivion
*We are in the middle of Vulca, trying to kill the Queen of the Djinn... but no one has posted for ages.*
Feb 5, 2009