Sionarama

Wow. Amazing. How do u do it? You write about regular relationships and make it sound well...magical...poetic? My words fumble to grasp at how deep this work is. You should ...

Wow! I have a few questions: Is Violet a ghost? What is the strange mark? Where is everybody? I can't wait for the next chapter!

OMG!!! So twisted... I LOVE it!

Amazing work!!! I LOVE the ending!! In the beginning, The sentence She groaned as she lifted it off the moving truck, moving... I like except for the 2 movings. You ...

Ron didn't want to go to the trip. Period. No questions asked. Every year Ron's family -- which was comprised of his overly outgoing mom, his busy body dad, and ...

dear TheWriters, I enjoyed your work even though it sounds sorta like The Looking Glass Wars. When you were writing about the beasts in the forest you forgot the S. ...

Dear wiggy1 this piece of writing is so heart felt! I love the emotions you release and the phrase ...The blood red roses...! ~sionarama

Fall the leaves on the the trees are changing. instead of bright luscious green is red orange and yellow. they (the leaves) make their annual trip to the ground. Winter ...

You used too many The man to begin your sentences. What type of creature is Dobliv? What does "The man" want"? I like Lord of the Rings type of stories. ...

Interesting.... You use to many ands. Also, you should spell it instead of putting &. I would also like to know the background. Where is Tala from? Who is the ...

Drop a seed let it fall when it is on the ground life starts. Soon sprouts of joy will come be patient let it grow. A bud appears, love starts. ...

A little short, don't you think? This type of poem is called a haiku.

Dear mrschaos, you have a lot of spelling errors, but I think if you wrote it on purpose that would be cool! I don't really enjoy the first verse. It ...

Laying on summer's edge the grass as sweet as honey you sleep in. you awake gentle words run down your face like caressing rain. weaving them together you make a ...

Dear Cheesy, interesting.... though I think you should expand on it a bit. Is Caroline the assassin? Why is she crying? Is Carla dead? Overall I believe you have an ...