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This poem is so thoughtfull and emotionall! It would have been nice if you rhymed, but I love it w/o the rhyming! :smt003

Amazing story! You really have a knack for writing! You should publish a book.

Oranges, lots of oranges! Mya smelled the tropical fruit. She always went to the Brazillian Market on Sunday when the fruit was ripe and fresh. As always, she lingered on ...

Interesting post! I want to see what happens next! I think you should have put this in fantasy or romantic fiction. But keep on writng!

Great story!! Though I know someone with a name SO close to yours! It's called Shades Of Violet. It would be respectfull if you changed your name.

Hey! I hope you like it! This was for my writing class so please ignore the markings and tear it appart! I Lightning booms. Elements against elements, gods against titans, ...

Ahhhhhh! I love it! Is it for your boyfriend?

OMG!!! I can't wait to read more!

So passionate! I love ur poem.

Just a question. Are you friends with Victoria? 'Cause this poem is pretty harsh, but truthful. Please don't get apset! I love it! Great job! :wink: :elephant: :smt005 :lol: :D ...

Hey, great story! U need some commas though. In the sentence "now girls... you have to capitalize now and have a comma after girls... U have a few gramaticl errors, ...

Cool sci-fi story! I love the this sentence: That was the point, to weed out the lesser beings. Using death. Instead of her running legs were a throbbing red, maybe: ...

I like the subject of this poem. An innability to cry.... In the beginning, I like the flow and the rhymes. In the 4th paragraph last sentence, It sounded a ...

Dear skutter11, I love how you reapet that one phrase! Also, you should call this poem "To Be A Kite"

Interesting! I couldn't figure out what the Sickness was. And it was cool it was love! It's very thought provoking! :lol: