Sionarama

Heavens to Besty! I'm hear to review your works and a pice of mind! I like this story!! People need to be shown what happens inside a girl's head! They ...

"No.... My–– my---Adonis!" Aphrodite wailed all alone on top of Mt. Lebanon. Encasing his handsome limbs in the myrrh tree's branches, her tears slid down her face and landed on ...

ROFL :lol: ! I love this poem!!! I'm a poet myself and I think this poem is new and original!! I agree with Ben you rap? I know guys mostly ...

I love the warrior series! It's really funny that I was gonna write a story about RainClan!!! LOL :lol: !! I think you need more setting. Where are they? Describe ...

Hi there! I like your work and you did a SPLENDERIFIOUS job!! You need to have spaces in most places (I wont spell them out for you!) and your narrator ...

Wow so poetic! I don't agree w/ everyone else. I like it as a story! @yuriiko 1235 it's not almost is! I like how it is almost lke a poem ...

Sorry if I was too harsh...I expected something more... Anyway there is a children's book about a little kid who finds a magic marker....Thanks for accepting my criticism like a ...

RK, Um........ Nice work. That's about all I have to say. It was an okay take off of that book.... I don't think you potrayed Kevin well. He finds this ...

this actually happened to me! Please comment! :elephant: silently serenading, we dance. even though we are surrounded by people, it seems as if we are alone. I look up embarrassed, ...

Nice story. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Hey leeannerz! I love your story! It's interesting how she's only a number. I know you wroter this in the bottom, but I WOULD like to know where we are ...

The only thing I can say is that is it made me cry! You potrayed the characters feelings beautifully! I love your work. :smt005 :smt005 :smt005

That was beautiful! I like how you put the subject of the paragraph in between the 2 lines! I can't wait to see other s of your wok!

this is a little thing I did for a writing class off of the Bundle of Sticks aesop fable! Remember to tear it appart! In the crystal castle of the ...

Om my God!!!!!!! So thrilling! So many questions unanswered! I love these type of stories! You are a real master of story telling.