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Re: The Forgotten
Prologue He didn’t look anything like she expected. great begining! Her mother had told her about the guy that was coming to train her but she had no idea he’d ...
Apr 2, 2010 -
Re: Feed The Pink Elephant! [Open!]
Hey Pink, I would like a review. It is called After Adonis and it's romantic fiction though it's also fantasy. Please help me. I'm going to write a second chapter ...
Apr 2, 2010 -
Re: I am new
I totally agree w/ vanadis!! and you of course. Just to tell you, you are one of my friends. You continue to suprise and inspire me. I have a poem ...
Apr 2, 2010 -
Re: Mistress of the Bow: CH 1- The Fortune-Teller EDITED VERSION
[/quote] “Our Lady of Tara!” gasped Fiona, her hand going to mouth. Her eyes were wide with amazement as she observed the fortune lady. We walked forward, oblivious of the ...
Mar 31, 2010 -
Re: I am new
Wow. I LOVE your name! It's the best!!! What state do u live in? Sorry, just a regular stalker question....
Mar 31, 2010 -
Re: A Tale of Ships and Sailors
Good job Christian! I'll also be your reviewer. I hope I made your day! This is a great poem and I loved the rhymes. Great imagery and I like the ...
Mar 31, 2010 -
Re: The Nymph
where is the poem???!! I really want to read it!!!
Mar 25, 2010 -
Re: Shades of Violet(4)[death]
Yay!!!!! I love your stories!!! Sorry I was a little late w/ the reply. I couldnt find this story anywhere!! Finally I looked in your profile. I nothing more to ...
Mar 24, 2010 -
Re: The Beginning
I liked your story. It's not a very original topic but you made it your own. Kudos!!! Your story leaves me hanging. I love this!! I hope you can write ...
Mar 24, 2010 -
Re: It's Easier Not Knowing (Chpt. 1)
Coolio! You should spell out numbers and not change tences... I would like a descript of Josh and more of Yourself..... where's the mom? work? What time is it? These ...
Mar 24, 2010 -
Re: Wonderful Times and Rhymes
mothers, fathers sons and daughters all sitting around the family tree. all filled with glee for one another glee for the new, glee for the old, glee for the shy, ...
Mar 24, 2010 -
Re: My Guardian Angel
My angel above my shoulder, My angel above my head. My angel by my window, I'd like it more if you put above instead of by . the by interupts ...
Mar 24, 2010 -
Re: After Adonis
ok, but its romantic fiction not fanfic because its not copying Percy Jackson.
Mar 23, 2010 -
Re: Thrive
Heya Valentine! I'm not sure about what u need, I'm just gonna fill out the profile. Name: Cinder Valentine Appearance: fiery red hair, violet/gray eyes, 5'2", pale, canine teeth pointed ...
Mar 22, 2010 -
Re: First Day
I couldn't wait to see my friends. We didn't talk on My Space or on the phone. I was so psyched to see my friends. I went to the bus ...
Mar 19, 2010
