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Re: The Old Man in the Street
[i]\ His helpful companion - a simple stick - kissed the cobble for every staggered stride. . i really like this piece! It was a simple, nostalgic way to write ...
Apr 13, 2010 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [7]
that's an awesome dress!!!! here's my pic: press my name!!
Apr 12, 2010 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [7]
U r TOTALLY beautiful Demeter!!! Your name should be Aphrodite not Demeter!!!
Apr 12, 2010 -
Re: Around the Campfire
This is a great story! Some of the sentences are run-ons, so you should change them... There is too much dialouge, but its a good writing form.
Apr 11, 2010 -
Re: After Adonis Ch. 2
Please comment and tear it apart! This is the second chapter to After Adonis...Hope u like it! Hera picked up a normal hand mirror. It was gilded with gold greek ...
Apr 11, 2010 -
Re: Sins - Help Wanted!
ooh!! I like these pics! U r a good drawer!!!Everyone is good except one thing... 1) Wrath and Envy are too similar!! I'm no artist so I dont know how ...
Apr 9, 2010 -
Re: The Ghost In My Bedroom
"Corey, Corey!" I liked this piece! You used an interesting way to write your story though I'm confused about who the Thing is. Is it her conciens? Oh well. I ...
Apr 7, 2010 -
Re: Shades of Violet
heya valentine! I have already PMd u a while ago with my boring powers sooooooo I REALLY hope you'll put them into concideration....
Apr 7, 2010 -
Re: Shades of Violet(5)[scream]
Wait a second!! Is that you?? Anyway, I love your stories so much I'm addicted to them like coffee! You should write them and publish them. They'll be a hit! ...
Apr 7, 2010 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [7]
Sorry Valentine!! I uploaded a new pic in my profile! click my name to see it. I did it on the same picture taker but I think its a more ...
Apr 7, 2010 -
Re: All because of a boy. . .
Hi i'm sionarama! I liked your story. It was heartwarming and sad though cussing is a big prob. also spacing is. Keep up the good work.
Apr 5, 2010 -
Re: Hot Air Balloon
:smt054 I'm experimenting with a new type of poetry so if it sounds weird let me know! high up in the air, a colorful cloud or messed up rainbow I ...
Apr 5, 2010 -
Re: My Bubba (Grandmother)
Bubba: grandmother in Yiddish. Carefully meticulously she labors under low lit lamp a cloth as fine as gold wraps around her fingers and makes a pattern that has never been ...
Apr 4, 2010 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [7]
U r REALLY cute if u don't mind me saying so....please look at mine by clicking my name in the above
Apr 4, 2010 -
Re: The Forgotten
Prologue He didn’t look anything like she expected. great begining! Here standing in front of her was the complete opposite. same with this line! He was at least 6 spell ...
Apr 2, 2010
