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Sionarama

  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Old Man in the Street

    [i]\ His helpful companion - a simple stick - kissed the cobble for every staggered stride. . i really like this piece! It was a simple, nostalgic way to write ...

    Apr 13, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: Post Your Pic Here [7]

    that's an awesome dress!!!! here's my pic: press my name!!

    Apr 12, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: Post Your Pic Here [7]

    U r TOTALLY beautiful Demeter!!! Your name should be Aphrodite not Demeter!!!

    Apr 12, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Around the Campfire

    This is a great story! Some of the sentences are run-ons, so you should change them... There is too much dialouge, but its a good writing form.

    Apr 11, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: After Adonis Ch. 2

    Please comment and tear it apart! This is the second chapter to After Adonis...Hope u like it! Hera picked up a normal hand mirror. It was gilded with gold greek ...

    Apr 11, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Sins - Help Wanted!

    ooh!! I like these pics! U r a good drawer!!!Everyone is good except one thing... 1) Wrath and Envy are too similar!! I'm no artist so I dont know how ...

    Apr 9, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Ghost In My Bedroom

    "Corey, Corey!" I liked this piece! You used an interesting way to write your story though I'm confused about who the Thing is. Is it her conciens? Oh well. I ...

    Apr 7, 2010
  • Writers Corner Re: Shades of Violet

    heya valentine! I have already PMd u a while ago with my boring powers sooooooo I REALLY hope you'll put them into concideration....

    Apr 7, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Shades of Violet(5)[scream]

    Wait a second!! Is that you?? Anyway, I love your stories so much I'm addicted to them like coffee! You should write them and publish them. They'll be a hit! ...

    Apr 7, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: Post Your Pic Here [7]

    Sorry Valentine!! I uploaded a new pic in my profile! click my name to see it. I did it on the same picture taker but I think its a more ...

    Apr 7, 2010
  • General Articles Re: All because of a boy. . .

    Hi i'm sionarama! I liked your story. It was heartwarming and sad though cussing is a big prob. also spacing is. Keep up the good work.

    Apr 5, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Hot Air Balloon

    :smt054 I'm experimenting with a new type of poetry so if it sounds weird let me know! high up in the air, a colorful cloud or messed up rainbow I ...

    Apr 5, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: My Bubba (Grandmother)

    Bubba: grandmother in Yiddish. Carefully meticulously she labors under low lit lamp a cloth as fine as gold wraps around her fingers and makes a pattern that has never been ...

    Apr 4, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: Post Your Pic Here [7]

    U r REALLY cute if u don't mind me saying so....please look at mine by clicking my name in the above

    Apr 4, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The Forgotten

    Prologue He didn’t look anything like she expected. great begining! Here standing in front of her was the complete opposite. same with this line! He was at least 6 spell ...

    Apr 2, 2010


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