Sionarama

I wrote this when I was 8 so its not one of my longest poems (duh!). But I was really suprised when I saw the reviews. I think its a ...

Xx!!!!! You are very beautiful!! I hope you take this as a compliment but, to me, you look like a version of Katy perry.... Howler: you are cute and it ...

Thanks tanith for saying I raised good points!! I understand the situation and I am very pleased that i could find so many people who argue so well. This has ...

They had never come back. 1) She looked excited. “A Poptart?” “Exactly.” Tara squealed. 2) “Can I have a girl spend the night?” He braced himself. Sure enough, there was ...

Wow. :smt022 I'm speechless. People don't do that a lot. This was an emotional and terrifyingly beautiful story. You put great descriptions and feelings. At first, I thought he was ...

Valentine, Sorry for reviewing again! I just read a magazine specifically talking about mystery stories. Here are some pointers: 1) make up abreviations. Like maybe a KBK (killed by knife). ...

Violet eyes are NOT impossible!!!!! They are just not common! Humph! i will not give up hope, Sionarama

Oh, Lee-Anna! You know me so well! This is why we are BFFLs. I write and you correct even though you write, I can never find any thing wrong! I ...

Layla, Your welcome! Yes, I understand this thank you so much for telling me!! Chow for now, siona

I disagree with Elinor, somewhat. It was definitely rushed, and could use some proper punctuation, but I think it was a fun read. It's very lighthearted, and I don't think ...

As always your writing is wonderful to read. You've also come quite a way in credibility too, becasue I didn't see any of those unrealistic reactions like in the early ...

I love love love LOVE this!!!! You have accurately made all four show/movies hilarious by connecting them! I have never seen twilight but I can guess what's going on. Could ...

I agree with Miss Snoink over there! Your MC (main character) is portrayed in a rather feminine manner. And when I heard the name Zane, I knew it was a ...

this is a fake news report about a made up rock star named Peter Matthews. If you like it, please remember to press the LIKE button at the bottom! Playing ...

Navita, This essay was turned in by me for my writing class called Institute of Excellence in Writing or usually known as I.E.W. This was a comparative essay comparing Greek ...