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Re: Garden photo's
I love them!!! Great photography and style... Are these pictures from your house?? They are BEAUTIFUL! My favorite? The second one. roses are lovely...... Bye
May 18, 2010 -
Re: love
My corrections will be in blue: Tori paced through the corridors of his mind. He couldn't find the right thing to say. And then it hit him. He walked to ...
May 18, 2010 -
Re: A random love story
Awwwww! This was SO cute and romantic!! The storyline was great but it didnt seem very real. First, he tells this girl he likes her and she cries. This makes ...
May 13, 2010 -
Re: John McCain
huh??
May 13, 2010 -
Re: Raindrops
will you review Our Dance by me? it's a poem. Just click my name!!!!
May 7, 2010 -
Re: The Allergic Reaction
Too bad!!! I'm home schooled!!!!!!!!
May 7, 2010 -
Re: John McCain
I LOVED this!!!! No complaints. At all. Great rhyming and words. Think you could do one on Palin? ~Sionarama p.s. if anyone knows Mcain's email, send it to him!!
May 6, 2010 -
Re: The Allergic Reaction
Thanks Elinor!! I appreciate it. The oonly problem is that I don't have a friend who use to like their allergy. Do you have any allergies?? Sionarama
May 6, 2010 -
Re: Lair of Beast
Okay peoples sorry for all of the confusions!! If I could, I'd delete it :(! Yes, I understand it is bland and dull, too fast or too slow. I was ...
May 6, 2010 -
Re: After Adonis
Yah I'm TOTALLY interested!!!! Lee-Anna, thanks for finally reviewing!! it's about time (hahahaha)! I'll be sure to try and change it....
May 5, 2010 -
Re: Zero to Hero
Awwwwww thanks lala!!! This was a writing piece for my writng class. She gave you a picture and you had to make a story out of it. No one else ...
May 5, 2010 -
Re: Long Grammar Reviews!
Yo leeanerz!!! I wants a review!! Title: Lair of Beast Genre: action/adventure with a little fantasy Synopsis: Will the friends get out of the Lair alive? Please go by clicking ...
May 5, 2010 -
Re: Lair of Beast
We silently trudged up the hill. it was dark and the full moon was hidden behind ominous clouds. Finally, we reached it. It was a great manor and its windows ...
May 5, 2010 -
Re: Raindrops
Hey Elinor!! Will you review: Title: The Allergic Reaction Genre: other story Synopsis/Theme: Coping with an allergy Link: Alakazam!! Also: Title: Skin Genre: Fantasy Fiction (its actually scary). Syn
May 5, 2010 -
Re: The Flower
Dear Elinor, Thanks a million!! I'm having trouble fixing it because it was one of my first poems. This is a metaphorical flower about the evolution of human emotions. And ...
May 4, 2010
