Sionarama

Photo 377.jpg Hey you guys! I am posting another drawing I did, this time of an emo boy. I based the face shape and hair off of Alex Evans. Thank ...

Sorry about the long wait! I've tried to correct the errors from the other chapters, and I would love some reviews! On the steps of Olympus, Persephone tried to carry ...

Wow that was a really good story! I just had some few nitpicks though. You may need to read your story aloud and look for place where you could put ...

Thanks so much Lavvi! I'm so glad that you liked it, especially after you had read a lot about WW2! Hmmm, I'm going to PM you about the title. I ...

Wow. This is an amazing poem! You had amazing imagery and beautiful similies and metaphors. It really gave me an idea of what it is like to be old, to ...

Dear Everyone Who Has Commented, Thank you so much for commenting on my poem Deserted! It has made me feel really good about my poems and style of writing. I ...

This was amazing! Nothing bad to it :) Actually, the only nitpick was that it went from #10 to #1 but I understand. It's the least worst to biggest worst. ...

Thank you both so much! I really appreciate the feedback. Strawberry, freshly dug sellers in the Holocaust was that you had to give all your valuables away to the SS, ...

The house along Himmel Street Loomed over the dusty field in which it sadly lay. Its owners had gone Said the freshly dug seller Random possessions scattered And Scrambled clothes ...

haha lovin it!

hahaha great use of color and I lover your drawings and I LOVE THE COMIC! thanks!

I'm not too worried about the grammer. I'd like it if you guys could tell me which places in it are most confusing, don't make sense, and your overall feeling ...

I'm going to do as much as I can with out burning out. I'll set my goal towards 20, but you never know. Hopefully, I'll get more. chow for now, ...

This is a great poem! It has a nice rhyme and you use very good descriptive words. There is nothing wrong with it!! Thank you so much for this poem, ...

This is a great poem! It has a nice rhyme and you use very good descriptive words. There is nothing wrong with it!! Thank you so much for this poem, ...