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  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Dramatic Re: A Pocket Full of Posies (4)

    Hihi 8) I'm going to elaborate on the civil engineering thing in the future, the little section at the start is just Felix being melodramatic, really. Oh, and nah, I've ...

    Apr 3, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Teen Fiction Re: A Pocket Full of Posies (1)

    Hey Attolia, thanks for this, it's muchly appreciated! I 100& get where you're coming from on the voice thing. My writing is often very voice-focused, and as a result, I ...

    Apr 3, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Realistic Re: The Boy Who Broke Mirrors (Chapter Eight)

    I did, thanks! It rained a lot, but I ate a real life French croissant in a French cafe, so I can't complain.

    Apr 2, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Dramatic Re: A Pocket Full of Posies (3)

    ohhidere. Thanks for this! This chapter has struggled a lot for reviews (everyone must hate me), so this is muchly appreciated

    Apr 2, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Teen Fiction Re: A Pocket Full of Posies (2)

    Hey Pretzel! Thanks for the review :) I'm not sure if you've read the first chapter, but Felix has zero recollection of anything before the age of 8, and doesn't ...

    Apr 2, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Realistic Re: The Boy Who Broke Mirrors (Chapter Eight)

    Or an assassin who kills people with his bike. That's why it's so red, isn't it? YOU'VE CAUGHT ONTO MY CUNNING PLAN, GODDAMNIT. No, but in all seriousness, many thanks ...

    Apr 2, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Realistic Re: The Boy Who Broke Mirrors (Chapter Eight)

    Thanks muchly for this review! I 100% agree with you on my tendency to mention things that have happened, but not actually (really) showing them. I've had a tendency in ...

    Apr 2, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Teen Fiction Re: A Pocket Full of Posies (2)

    Thanks for getting to this in, like, record time! It's awesome to hear that you like this so far, and I'm glad the first chapter explained everything decently. Oh, and ...

    Mar 25, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Teen Fiction Re: A Pocket Full of Posies (2)

    Hey there :) Thanks so much for this, it's super helpful! I can't thank you enough for pointing out the grammatical stuff because I have a bad habit of wording ...

    Mar 25, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Politics Re: .

    Oh, I understand that completely, trust me :P

    Mar 25, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Teen Fiction Re: A Pocket Full of Posies (2)

    Thanks muchly for the review! U r the light of my life

    Mar 22, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Luneset 01OLD OUTAKES

    OH MY GOD I MUST HAVE MISSED THE NOTIFICATION FOR THIS, I'M SO SORRY, I HATE ME TOO. Well, I'm glad I was of use anyway. You sound like you ...

    Mar 22, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: The Boy Who Broke Mirrors (Chapter Seven)

    Ermahgerd, hi!! :D I'm super happy I managed to tangle you in this for seven chapters; that's always a good thing! And psht, please, this review was awesome. You need ...

    Mar 19, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Politics Re: .

    Hm, true true. Do you acknowledge its existence officially at any point? i.e. a doctor/psychologist/someone says something to her, even just in passing that makes her/us make a link. You ...

    Mar 19, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Politics Re: .

    Oh I see, hm, that is tricky. As things progress and we see a pattern emerging in regards to her reactions to stress, it'll probably naturally become more evident. So ...

    Mar 19, 2016


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