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Me again! I got your email, so am just dropping by to let you know my thoughts on the latest version. Apologies for not getting to chapter four yet, so ...

Yeah, the night-watch scenario is hardly a big issue, I'm just fussy :P Ah I see, I generally think of hidden in plain sight things as really normal looking (hence ...

I'll probably be asleep by then, but it's chill, sending you brainwaves fo' sure.

That 100% used to be a code back in, like, YWS 2k10 days or something, so dw it's just because you're old. Like a withered prune.

U rock, as always. This is weird timing too because I'm in the process of posting the next chapter now, you little psychic, you. With the whole Effie being chill ...

Thanking you :P I am 100% with you on the wounded thing btw, I mean, my obsession is rearing on unhealthy. I'm always super appreciative of your nit-picky things because ...

Thanking you :) I'm glad the ending with Carmen didn't just seem random and weird or anything, I was a little worried of that. The boxing club thing is something ...

Thanks so much for this! I seriously appreciate all your nit-picks and going through this with a fine tooth combed, because that's what I suck at. I 100% need to ...

Hey again! So I want to start off by saying that I definitely think this chapter is an improvement on the last version. As stated in my last review though, ...

Yay, thanking you! :P I'm super relived to hear things don't seem as crazily jumpy now. I've always thought/hoped that the jumpiness is more of a problem at the beginning ...

Ah okay! Well that's fair enough, just do what you think is best for the novel. It might be wise to mention them in passing a bit over the next ...

Ooooo okay, I look forward to finding out what all that is about! For Gustaff and Edda, it's definitely good to give us a glimpse now! This would apply more ...

Yay, psychology! :P

hidere. Thanks for your feedback, as always, it's super appreciated! I know I need to explain Effie's decision to visit Preston a bit better, so imma stop being lazy and ...

Thanks muchly for your feedback :3 I'm glad you mentioned the Annabel speaking to Ava thing, as it's something I need to address (and kinda forgot about, oops). I'm glad ...