Sins

Heya Biffle! :) I lay here. Nothing enters my mind. My eyes don't pick up anything but black. This is just a suggestion, but I think a different word would ...

Heya! :) This isn't going to be a very thorough critique, mostly because there isn't much to critique! Your grammar is pretty much perfect and I'm really liking this idea. ...

Hey Esther! :) Here to review... obviously :lol: Could it really be for the arrival of Anita and her brother? Alex pondered ; It surely was possible . A lthough ...

Hey Isha! I've got to say, I loved this! It was depressing... but I like depression! K? :wink: I really didn’t want to leave, but something inside of me was ...

Because you don't have any reviews as of yet, I'll try and be as thorough as I can! Chapter 6 “Don’t worry, it’ll be fine. She’s probably halfway home by ...

You know the drill... :wink: :lol: This reviews going to be another short one; sorry! Like I said in my last review, everything I would mention, I've already mentioned in ...

Hey again Isha! :) This was pretty good! Although, it wasn't my favourite chapter so far. There seemed to be quite a lot of dialogue. It bothered me slightly. Mind ...

I just reviewed this but then my computer decided to crash. :evil: Die computer. Die. Anyway! I'm baaaack :twisted: Wow... I actually freaked myself out there. I've got to say, ...

Hey again! :) I'm not actually going to give this a thorough review, mostly because I'm pretty happy with everything! Ranger Hawk pointed out anything I would have said. Although, ...

Hey Isha! Here to review as requested 8) I'm not going to mention any nit-picks, mostly because everyone has pointed out anything that I would say! There's no need in ...

Hey! :) I'm no expert on scripts - not at all - but I really liked this! It made me giggle at the end and it's funny because it's so ...

Hey BottomlessEyes :) This is more of a comment than a critique, by the way. Any nit-picks or critiques have been covered by the other reviewers and you've edited it ...

Heya :) Here to review again! I really like the title of this story, by the way! :lol: The Prince’s Ball was rumoured to be one unlike any other there ...

Heya :) Here to review as requested! Poetry isn't my forte, but I'll give you the best review I can. This love from afar is bittersweet. I really liked this ...

Hey shubhi! :) Here to review as requested. Don't expect anything amazing though... I've never actually reviewed anything non-fiction before! :lol: I'll try my best though! ‘Just 1411 left!’ Were ...