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  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Call Me Mr. Ailuro~(1.1)

    I'm finally here! Okay, I want to warn you about this review before I begin, Shubs. As I've already said, I'm going to concentrate more on sentence structure in this ...

    Apr 18, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Here There Be Dragons - 9

    Hawkeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeey, bwoooooiii. 8) I had a lot of free time this afternoon, so I thought, why not check out Here There Be Dragons, eh? I've read all of the chapters ...

    Apr 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Once my only love but now, my passionate hate.

    You. Okay, so yeah, here I am as requested. I probably should have warned you that I fail at poetry reviews, but hey, that's me for you. Please don't be ...

    Apr 12, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Objective of The Game

    ohhaithere. I was just going to edit the post I already made, but then I realised you won't get this notification informing you that I have returned. You must know ...

    Apr 10, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: One by One (chapter 1)

    Heya, Flow! :) Here to review as requested. R achel ebecca Black Oh, hot damn! KILL HER! KILL HER! Err, anyway... Okay, so I like this. It's interesting. Your MC, ...

    Apr 10, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Dreams Tell Lies - Preface

    Heya, Icy! :) I can't apologise enough for getting to this so late. I hope you don't mind too much. Okay, so this is a pretty short piece. Because of ...

    Apr 10, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Story Eight- The Pain I

    Me again. ^^ H'okay, so I like this. It's definitely interesting, and I have to say that out of this piece and the other one I reviewed for you, this ...

    Apr 9, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Story Six- The Battle of Liquid Light

    Heya, Riveneye! I'm terribly sorry this has taken me ages to get to. It doesn't normally take me this long to get to a review request, honestly. It's just that ...

    Apr 8, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Mike

    I'm finally here! :D I like this, Ellie. It's short and sweet. Well, not sweet exactly, but hey, you know what I mean. It was pretty short, so I'm not ...

    Apr 8, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Turning the Tables(1.1)

    I really wish I'd been able to got to this sooner. Why do you ask the best reviewers to review your stuff? Arrrggghh. xD Okay, so yay, I like this! ...

    Apr 7, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: Dear Inspiration

    Oh, God, I'm going to be useless. :P This is what I get for not responding to requests quick enough, eh? I'm not exactly too sure about how to review ...

    Apr 3, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: Into the Depths. 5

    Ellie! Skinsy's finally here. x3 This is quite good because now you've sent me the non-edited version of the novel, I can compare it with this edited version. That might ...

    Apr 3, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: To Kill A Unicorn [2/2]

    Rangeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeer! You've reviewed a lot of my stuff lately, so the least I could do is review this for you. This review will be based on both the first and ...

    Mar 29, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Valentine's Innocence (For Teardrop's Contest)

    I wish I hadn't offered to review this now... I suck at poetry reviews. xD Hehe, I'll give it a try though! But I can guarantee that it may be ...

    Mar 28, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Delusion

    Jaaas, hi! I've arrived per request. You've already gotten some great reviews, so I can't guarantee that this review will be helpful, but hey, I'll try my best. If you ...

    Mar 27, 2011


The first draft is a trip to the amusement park. The next drafts are returning there as a safety inspector.
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