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Wassup, my home-skillin' biscuit. You did the thing I suggested about putting the name of the POV character at the beginning of the chapter, yay I feel important. It totally ...

Hey there! I saw your story here lurking in the green room, so figured I'd come pull it out of there for you :) So this is such a cute ...

The last chapter (you've posted), ehrmagawd. Let's get right into things, shall we? Gabriel and Eloise actually spoke to each other, yay. I'm super pumped to find out what's going ...

Me again :P (there is no escape) MORE DRAMA. I definitely won't have many critiques for this chapter because you did a great job, overall. The whole idea of the ...

OOOOO DRAMA. This is a relatively short chapter, particularly compared to the last one, so I'm not sure how useful my review will be. Plus I liked this chapter overall, ...

With it being review day and what not, I figured it would make sense for me to start off here! :P This chapter was another pleasant one to read, and ...

You've got a right old cliffhanger here, ain't ya? :P I was super fond of this chapter, and I'm really beginning to settle into this here novel now. I love ...

Ooooo another Gabriel chapter, very interesting! So firstly I want to say that I really hope this becomes a recent occurrence, and that every 5 chapters or whatever it may ...

'Sup, I figured I'd come and review chapter five because hey, why not? This is a pretty short chapter with nothing especially major happening, so I'm not sure how much ...

Hey, it's me again :D One quick question: this may be me officially turning insane, but did this chapter start with the same line that ended the last chapter? Anywho, ...

Me again :P Okay so yay, this is progressing very nicely! I'm assuming this place is a boarding school, right? Anywho, you're beginning to introduce some other characters now, so ...

Hey again! I have an hour or so to spare until I need to leave for my next lecture, so I figured I'd go ahead and do this second review ...

Per request, here I am! :P You already have heaps of awesome reviews, so I fear this may be a little useless. Nonetheless, I will try my best to help ...

I'm back :P Okay, so let's get straight into this! I feel like this is going to be a rather short, probably massively unhelpful review so for that I apologise ...

'Sup. Sorry for being lazy and taking a while to get to this! My weekend was pretty crazy, and 100% honesty: I'm a lazy person. But alas, here I am ...