Sincerly_I_Write

Chapter 1: How it all started Chapter 1: Come Out, Come Out Where Ever you are "I can't believe this is happening to me. Of all people, how come it ...

thanks so much for helping me i f you could if you have time could you comment my other poems please?

I can't see your star Though I patiently waited By myself Awaiting for the death of today The lights of the sky frighten it away And I'm alone now, Me ...

It was OK you had a good idea but i found some mistakes. You need to watch for punctuation errors and capitalization errors. Such as for punctuation you need to ...

Thank you for informing me of my mistakes.When i come home today I will be sure to edit my work. Please if you can read my other poems and see ...

i don't see anything wrong with the fifth -to-last line but i would put that line " I love you so much, but you close your eyes , afraid to ...

Even the Sakura blossoms can't immortalize your graceful steps Take my hands and we will dance the moonlit night away for this is our last. The crowd cheers as we ...

UMMMMMMMMMMMMM i actually liked your poem...alot....i think that it could possibly turn into something more and yes parts of it were confusing ( big words >.

and then she was gone She chose to walk alone. The others watched in a distance. She wished she were a bird , So she can fly away. The others ...

I was happy when you held me, When you kissed me, When you said you loved me, But when she came along I was forgotten. Left on a corner in ...