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I like this I don't think any critiquing is needed here. Just some few grammar errors i saw but the content of the story is well written. Keep Up The ...

"with your fucked up little knives with your fucked up little words." I Like your little poem you got here but this part I quoted right here makes no sense ...

Well to me I think its to short. But that is my opinion you can make it the size you want it to be. No offense I didn't really like ...

I like this but keep going. I mean by this is you need more in this poem. I like the rhyme scheme of the poem nice how you kept the ...

Night to me is scary Night isn't very nice It takes away what we love the most Which is daytime. Sometimes I like the night When ever I want to ...

Not the best thing to start off with. But its good. I enjoyed reading it. I suck at poetry too so don't worry you will get the hang of it. ...

He paces his quarters, One hand on his belt. The other, beside him, Oh, the pain it has felt! The firelight warms him, Though not to the core. He sobs ...

Hi my name is Emily and I am 16 years old. I want to tell you about something amazing that happened to me last year in 9th grade. It was ...

I Loved it. Nothing to critique from me. Well done

This is a little cliche but well done. Not bad story but chill out with the cliches and work on grammar.

I like this it is very good. Nothing much to say about this work except good job.

This was good. I liked it especially the beginning. Nothing to critique here. Good Job

Its a normal Friday night of watching TV. My parents were out on the town. I didn't know where they went and didn't care at that moment of time. When ...

I liked this very nice to add the music with it. Good Job

"But, those words that we most don’t want to be true we do not hide: rather, we grasp the white and read the black, over, and over, and over." This ...