SimonCowellLuver

This is a nice story and its descriptive which i like. Good Job I must say i didn't find any spelling errors or punctionuation errors neither. I really enjoyed reading ...

I like this it is very well written. I have no problems with this story. Happy writing SimonCowellLuver :)

[quote="Gwenevire"]Let It Bleed Chapter Four Foos Small birds chirped, the southing noise of waves, and the cool spray of the ocean pelted the rocks eager to get a taste of ...

[quote="Flemzo"][i][Prompt was "write a poem about how you feel about valentine's day". Hopefully my message is clear. Any help on a title would be great. This is due on, when ...

[quote="Summer"]I am reading Twilight right now finally, and this just popped in my head. I Fear thy whom I loved By Summer I fear thy whom I loved with the ...

I like it but only leave one space between each lines. Why did you put double spaces that is stupid. But like your poem. SimonCowellLuver :)

[quote="Warrior Princess"]I know this play is VERY random and VERY retarded and VERY short but I'm experiencing both writer's and actress's block right now and it was the best I ...

I really don't like the repition its kind of lame. No offense. I like the poem it was well thought out. I think you need to add some punctionuation in ...

Hey I have some critiquing to do here. So lets get to it shall we. First of all I don't like the repition that is going on here Next stupid ...

Love is the thing that makes you crush But that is never going to happen to me Love is my worst enemy I just ignore it My life is hell ...

Black sphere, elongated. Double yellow, The colour’s blurred. Its color's not colour's Sweat film on forehead, My forehead, Why did you put "my forehead" again? It sounds awkward. The rest ...

First of all Don't you think you want to put a rating on this because of the content at the beginning? Good Job I loved it. Me personally I love ...

[quote="Weatherthestorm"]This sift and soft played melody-- I cannot hear the rain. It plays for long and sets me free To hear the quiet song again. Dripping leaves are a [u]cacophony[/u] ...

I think this is a great poem just my opinion is i like rhyming poetry it makes it flow better. I still like your poem.

Great poem but some punctionuation errors here like in the first stanza Broken glass, Whisper your stories. Melt the tears Of cold, dead hearts. If there was a comma on ...