SimonCowellLuver

I never heard bout these till now. WOW!

Its a little overrated and cliche for me because i don't like the repitition. It gets annoying like i said before on your last critique. I don't feel like typing ...

Very interesting LOL. I really liked it. Good content in the story (which is very important in writing any kind of story.) Well Done i say. I try to say ...

[quote="Extraterrestial"]short stroy i wrote when i had writers block Do you mean story? Ring,Ring, death is here. I don't understand this line here. What does this suppose to mean? The ...

I really don't know what to do here... I like it but i don't like it. It gives mixed signals to me really. But I am not really feeling this ...

All you need now is some music. Ha! LOL I really liked trhis i think it could make a awesome song. I think you can be a good song writer. ...

I don't even think this is poetry. A short story but not poetry. First off It isn't wrote in a normal kind of poetry form. I think you should of ...

I think it is kind of Cliche to me kind of original. It was a good poem but not the best i seen written. But very well put together i ...

[quote="piepiemann22"]Not much can be said of a crush that I have. It comes and it goes, but It should be known. True feelings can confuse, ones heart they consume, but ...

I am really kind of busy right now so i am going to make this short, sweet and to the point. OK? I really think you could of added more ...

Had a mother who watched me like a hawk, waiting to swoop down on me if my skirt was, a tad too short. I've been there too; I'm not that ...

I really like this its very well written. I must say. All you have to do is be careful on your punctiouation. Sorry is that is spelled incorrectly. i am ...

I like your story you got here it is very interesteresting but it needs dome work to but i can help you with that later right now I like your ...

[quote="SirWozzell"]I stand alone In this huge field. I’m surrounded by grass Lush and perfectly green. There a trees around And a lake With sand near its sides. I feel that ...

Very interesting. XD I like it. Need some grammar work because some of them sound awkward when read. But that can be easily edited. Ta Ta for now SimonCowellLuver 8)