SimonCowellLuver

As the sun says goodbye the wonderful feeling starts to fade. and you almost start to cry but you remember the progress you’ve made. So you fall asleep with a ...

This was great penguin your a awesome writer. Great imagination, well written good job on editing it to. Well that is all i have to say bout it gotta go ...

so please, just take my hand, and let’s be honest here. This right here you can make "So please" combine with the second line because it isn't a real line. ...

I am a church goer my self i really like this. If you go to church do you read it there? If not you should it would give others inspiration ...

Hi i see a grammar error let me point it out to you ok.' "Smoothly do they glide Smoothly do they set The stars upon them twinkle Infinitely set " ...

Hello my dear this was great even though i don't know what Los Malos is. But very good i like the little smilies in between it was cute. :smt068 Totally ...

Camellias As I lay in my field of camellias, I think about the years I wasted. Captivated by your loving touch, a lullaby for a heartrending finish. Sing to me ...

First off what is the rating i hope no rating or rated R for content. I like it but a little emo and cliche trust me i know emo because ...

Awesome great work. Like he said if you get bad comments the only person who half to like the story is you! Not us but you. Your a great writer. ...

“’Kay,” I said, turning back towards Emily. I think you should just put "OK" instead of "Kay" because it sounds better and it is kind of quicker. That's my opinion ...

Thank you all for your crtiques i will make sure i fix them some time.

Finally something that is easy to read and is not cliche. Good work. I like it PM me if you need anything ok? SimonCowell Luver :)

Everyone thinks I am crazy But i am not. Everyone hates me That is what i already thought. I live alone with no one to hold me or keep me ...

I like your poem because it has a nice rhythm to it. Which i really like. XD I don't think there is any crtiquing needed on this poem. Just to ...

Yeah its a little cliche and emo but i like it. it isn't half bad even though emo and cliche are 2 things i hate very much indeed. But well ...