SimonCowellLuver

I can find some punctuation mistakes but not a bid deal. But great story I loved it. It had touched me. Great content not rude or anything negative. Well expressed ...

Next he started cursing at them from the door as the guys were yelling at each other. I couldn’t take this crap anymore. “Shut the hell up and all of ...

I saw some grammatical errors in here bigbear. lets take a look see shall we... They’re always talking and never listen That line doesn't really make sense it sounds awkward. ...

I like this idea it could be a really good one to. But I think it could be longer and more action or more describing. I think you can add ...

I really like it. I think this will turn out to be a great song someday. kepp on writing and someday it will pay off. That's for sure. Have a ...

[quote="Twinflower"]I carry you in my bones, Drag you around in my chest; You are an unwanted stone Buried deep into my flesh. Where are you when I hear you should ...

I like it. I don't see anything wrong with it really. Keep up the good work. SimonCowellLuver

Why is there repitition of the same 3 lines which are "Too much Too many So sick " It is kind of annoying of the repition but its ok i ...

Like the others said it was good. I enjoyed reading it. it was kind of cliche but still the whole poem was excellent. I just written a new poem also ...

I like it very well written and good content. I like it. I don't don't see anything that needs to be critiqued for right now so keep up the good ...

I am not a people person I like to be alone That is why i don't have... any friends. But who cares. Right? No one cares about me. Not now. ...

I like it but i don't really get the end you said the title was don't let me fall but at the end you want to fall. I don't get ...

PART 2 My parents were really proud of me that day. The next day they gave me a hero award for saving a person's life. I was glad I could ...

Great job. I don't see anything to critique really all the technical stuff is perfect couldn't be better. I really liked it. That's all i have to say about it. ...

All you need to do is add some commas here and there and you will be fine. I really like your poem you have here it is very good. Keep ...