SimonCowellLuver

Hi its SimonCowellLuver how are you? Ok the first stanza was gret matter of fact. But i had some problems with the secon one... Hell, a place of hate and ...

Hey Its SimonCowellLuver what up? Ok your little poem you got here is pretty good but i have some questions about it. It is kind of short. Short is ok ...

I really like your poem you got here or story i don't know or can't tell because of the structure it is kind of confusing because some stories are in ...

Thanks for the critques I will make sure i will edit

Verse 1 Nobody cares about me They don’t even need me I'm all alone and lost in life I can’t find way out Of this cell and I want to ...

I like what you got here its pretty cool. I know this is off topic but in my Latin class all of our stories are based off of Cornelia and ...

Hi I am SCL or SimonCowellLuver. I am here to say your poem is very good I love it but I saw some grammatical errors so i am going to ...

Hey girl what up! What you got here is awesome and it is very good. I only saw some few problems so let me get them for you... I fell ...

Wow this is a very good poem you got here. I think it got emotion and passion all into it. Keep Up the good work. I would like to read ...

You are a good writer. Not bad what you got here. I only found one mistake which is... Or of beauty that my poems shall make last In words alone, ...

It can't be right you need a comma here For me to cry you need a period here When I think of you comma here Because you're the perfect guy. ...

Play House I. Le Petit Enfant Scientifique [pre] my little scientist on the floor, building blocks of color, something you need a comma here like Tetris, get rid of the ...

Leggero now.... No one can match the way her breasts move en sposina with each breath she takes as she sings sweetly on silver. Even the brass quiet as she ...

I made the star extra bright, Letting the glitter shine as though You could see it from space. It wasn’t the best star, The corners curled and the paper crinkled ...

You just have some grammar problems and i will will help you fix them ready... “For all these years you need a comma here. We have ridden in solitude. Always ...