SimonCowellLuver

I really like it. But I don't don't think you need the extra "I think" in there it seems repetitive and it gets annoying. But that is ok. I like ...

I really enjoyed reading your poem. Your rhyme scheme was excellent i like how the second and last line of the stanza rhymed it made it flow better. with fairy-tale ...

Let me start off with saying that the stucture makes it complicated to read. I am not saying i didn't like it I am saying it just makes it hard ...

Hello I am SimonCowellLuver just call me SCL. Alright not bad, not bad at all i like it. But I just didn't understand this one stanza here (posted below) please ...

Hi I am SCL how are ya! Ok I like what you got here it isn't bad at all. But I found some grammatical errors in it so let me ...

Ello I am SimonCowellLuver. I didn't really like it that much. There is no emotion into it. In poetry you should have some kind of emotion not just plain old ...

Hello October Girl how are you? I am fine. I like your poem it is very good but this one paragraph was similar to the song "Because of You" By ...

Walking in the pouring rain, It’s coming down like an big old' fiery flame. Why is this happening to me today. I don’t know what the hell is going on, ...

Hello I am SimonCowellLuver I really like your ittle poem or story you got here it had a graet message with it and I agree with it totally I really ...

What do you call this but i am going to be straight oiut with you this sucks. But I am sorry you have words in there that makes no sense ...

now my heart is clear i love you my dear. you make me laugh,you make me smile, you even kiss me on the cheek every once in a while. when ...

I like it but you need punctionuation it seems to be one run on sentence if you don't add commas or periods to start off. Also I didn't really like ...

Salve. I am SimonCowellLuver and I am hear to say that your little poem here is pretty good matter of fact. But the title i think has nothing to do ...

Ello or Salve I say. I am SimonCowellLuver. I really like your poem it is very well written I only saw one tiny problem. I do the grammar correction problems ...

Enblematic poetry is poetry written in the shape of what it's talking about. Take a wild guess what shape my poem is in. [pre]A picture can freeze a moment in ...