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Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [4]
9/10 really intense and creepy!
Oct 4, 2009 -
Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [4]
9/10 I like the picture, but can't read the words :)
Oct 4, 2009 -
Re: It Ends Tonight
Hey there, I don't really know if I'd count this as a poem, but it's definitely cute. I don't consider it Plagiarism since you said they're all songs from artists ...
Oct 4, 2009 -
Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [4]
8/10 it's slightly crazy, yet adorable
Oct 2, 2009 -
Re: ~*~The Dawn of War~*~
*Hey, I'm really just waiting for someone besides gsppcrocks10 to post. We've been kind of going back and forth for a bit and I'd love for some of the other ...
Sep 23, 2009 -
Re: Facade (PG 13)
Hey there, I really just wanted to say that I enjoyed the story and am looking forward to reading more. The whole situation is set up very realistically, kudos, but ...
Sep 22, 2009 -
Re: What is God?
I'm so glad to see someone who shares my beliefs on here. I feel like there are so many stories like yours and I love to hear them. You really ...
Sep 20, 2009 -
Re: perspective of an entertainer-PG13 (edited version)
Hey, most of what I caught was said by Lauren, so I just want to let you know that this was a very interesting piece, but since it kind of ...
Sep 20, 2009 -
Re: They Call Us Heroes
I call a spot :)
Sep 19, 2009 -
Re: Santa Fe Sunset (2)
I've decided to post another chapter, although I'm still nervous about this. :) I actually want to get it published haha, and so I don't know if this is wise, ...
Sep 18, 2009 -
Re: The Virus - 1
Hello there, I'll just be adding on a little bit. I kind of agree with Conrad Rice, but just want to say that by adding little details about how she ...
Sep 18, 2009 -
Re: Vesper Lynd
Hey, I really liked this overall. Basically people already mentioned the things that kind bother me, her chest and such, but I really like the hair and the eyes. Eyes ...
Sep 18, 2009 -
Re: ~*~The Dawn of War~*~
The girl had told her she had clothing for her, but when the ground shook again they all forgot about the matter of nudity. Instead, Ava ran in her half-form ...
Sep 18, 2009 -
Re: ~*~The Dawn of War~*~
Ava watched the Inferno stalk off chasing tremors. The mentalist boy followed after her hurridly, but something about the situation didn't quite fit for her. Not to mention the fact ...
Sep 17, 2009 -
Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [3]
10/10 that's the best..ever..
Sep 15, 2009
