Silversun

Hey, Snickerdooly! It's a really beautiful poem as a whole, and I figured I would go through it with you and tell you my thoughts over individual pieces. Rough calloused ...

Hey there hopeispeace!(: I'm a fan of poetry and really enjoyed reading this. What I liked most was how much it made me think, especially those first few lines. I ...

A/N: Tear into it(; My favorite color to breathe is orange. Not coral, that has too much pink, which tastes stuffy and is hard to inhale. And not really burnt ...

I don't know how long it's been, but it's been awhile! I'm back and ready to be a reviewing/ posting machine! (: it's good to be back!

Hey there! This was a really sound, grammatically correct poem that I enjoyed reading. I really liked the opening line! It's what drew me in to keep reading, so nice ...

Hey there glitterbox! First off, I want to say that I really enjoyed reading this because of how easy it was to relate to and because you made your feelings ...

I'd just like to let you know that I really liked this poem, espcially the way you used color to separete statements that were connected at the same time, if ...

They say the world is shrinking But you’re still as far away Because as I watch the sun sink softly Dripping below the west horizon You can sit alone, on ...

thank you all soooooooo much for the comments. It really helps me know what people like, what to keep doing, and what I need to work on. Thank you very ...

done on picnik:)

Hey! I think it's a good picture, but since I can't see all of it at once, I can't really tell! An easy way to fix this is to check ...

9/10 It really interests me and makes me wonder what happened and why:) Outside, the world was sideways.

:) hope you enjoy!

hey guys I'm baaaaack!

I enjoyed that a lot! It kept me pulled along the whole time, and I liked the whole fast forwarding thing. It made it seem like he had been planning ...