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That was like reading something professional! I guess I probably should have read the first chapter first but all in good time. All I would add is to describe Isabelle's ...

Thanks for reviewing me! I like your suggestions and... I do need some more proof reading. I hope I can refurbish this soon.

This has huge potential! I feel like with some lengthening you will have a great opening to an engaging book. Add some more details about Luna, her family, the Scouts, ...

I think is really adorable and rhythmical. The whole time I was reading it I could just feel the way everything flowed. After reading all the other posts on this ...

Hi. Would you please read and review my Specters of Verity Square intro? The link is in my signature. It's a little short but I'm hoping to expand one day. ...

**Sorry to have something so short, but I would still love a review** Mrs. Morganstern was doing her grocery shopping- the faded list held in her hand was written in ...

That was really... chilling. But in an amazingly well written way- I want to see more of your work because that was really excellent! One thing though, how would you ...

Wow. That was excellent- I can't wait for another chapter! I really heard the distinctive voice of Olivia and I could literally feel her emotions. The only thing i would ...

I thought this was excellent and I guess whatever I say has sort of been said already. All I can say with out being redundant is I feel like this ...