SilverSharpie

This is a really excellent piece of work. I don't have anything real to contribute but just to let you know... awsome poem.

This was a really excellent piece of work! I don't have anything to say about it so I just wanted to let you know that the whole thing was absolutely ...

I really liked this. I could feel how Mel felt the whole and I was amazed at your description of the school systems. I liked how you used capitalization in ...

Hey, nice work! This feels... incomplete though. I feel like you need more grief- your main characters lost her parents and sister and everyone and now all she can really ...

Wow. That was intense. I really liked your work and it had a very authentic sort of feeling- I could tell you really cared about Chester and Iggy. All I ...

I really like your poem with the repetition of "I'm sorry" at the end of every stanza- it had a really raw, emotional feeling to it. I would break up ...

The golden elixir has spilled for only you. Where can I look for solace when you have gone away? I have kept my promises, my debts are all settled but ...

I'm glad you all liked it! I don't really write poems so much so I'm excited that people enjoyed reading it.

I loved this poem. I shall start with the first thing I loved... - I though in the first stanza... "moths to a light really?" but then I saw how ...

Blue as the navy shadows chasing your disappearing figure and leaving me in the grips of what can only be called... Gray as the clouds above me disobliging, pressing like ...

Hello. I was hoping you would review my little intro for me- it needs a lot of work. I hope you will when you get the time! Thanks in advance. ...

My review is going to be so lame after canislupis's but here goes... THAT WAS AWESOME! Really, I liked it a lot. I mean, the beginning was a little awkward ...

Title: The Specters of Verity and Angelica Flink Genre: Fantasy What you'd like me to look at: Everything if you have the time, it's pretty brief Link to page: (also ...

Wow. I don't really read much poetry but I happened across this and I read and I am glad I did. This is really, absolutely, and utterly fantastic. I'm sorry ...

Thanks for the review and I should get some changes in pretty soon! Hopefully you'll re-review once it's touched up.