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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Roses are red, and so is Cherry Honey-Brown beer.

    I think you've done a nice job on contrasting personalities and reactions. (Jimmy and Ernest) Especially since Ernest's character could easily be written inconsistently. The jargon which you have him ...

    Dec 31, 2007


If I seem to wander, if I seem to stray, remember that true stories seldom take the straightest way.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind