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Re: Hungry Poet!! Will do reviews!! <3
Done! :)
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: The Voices In My Head
Hello!! Rain here! So, first I'd like to say thanks for requesting a review! I don't get many requests lately. So, on to the poem. Red- Grammer mistakes Blue- Things ...
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: Feed The Pink Elephant! [Open!]
Hello there! You haven't had many poetry requests, so here is one for you! If you review good, you'll be stuck with me for life!! Unless you don't want that...:) ...
Nov 19, 2010 -
Re: Teardrop's Reviews ( Accepting )
Well, I guess I'm the first person to ask for a review... Don't you feel lucky!! :) So, this is a poem, Its name is Letters from Your Shadow I ...
Nov 19, 2010 -
Re: Cassa-de review-ae
Hi!! I liked your last review, so, you get another request!! This is another poem Its name is Letters from Your Shadow Be as harsh as you see fit! Thanks ...
Nov 19, 2010 -
Re: Letter from your Shadow
Wrote this really late last night, edited a little today. What do you think?? You probably don’t remember me, but I remember you. I was your first friend; The one ...
Nov 19, 2010 -
Re: Ugly and Beautiful, Terrible and Amazing.
Hello! Nice poem, very real. Not much to say, other then a few suggestion: Blue: Things I think would help the poem, baced on my opinion. Red: Error in grammar/puncuation. ...
Nov 18, 2010 -
Re: RAWR!...Ahem. Would You Like A Review? (CLOSED)
Hello! I have a poem here for you Thanks! ~Rain~
Nov 16, 2010 -
Re: Storm.
Hello Rain here! So, I liked this poem, the rhyming messed me up a bit, if you could have a set rhyme scheme, it would work really good. Red- Grammer ...
Nov 15, 2010 -
Re: Dying Mother Earth
Hello, Rain here. I liked this, it was short and simple, the main problem I found was that it has no set structure. I think if you have a set ...
Nov 15, 2010 -
Re: To my dear "Friend" Writers Block *Way Edited*
So, this is an EXTREMELY edited version of this poem, the spoiler at the bottom is the original post. Dry spell, dry spell, go away! Don’t come back, another day! ...
Nov 15, 2010 -
Re: Your* Poem's Title is Probably In This One
Wow, it may not make complete sence, but, I like that you did this to try to get rid of writers block. It is a realyy good idea acculy. I ...
Nov 15, 2010 -
Re: A Moment when all things stop (poem)
Hello there! I liked this, it was sweet and simple. At first i wasn't all into the repatision, but by the end it just fit. A place like this would ...
Nov 15, 2010 -
Re: Hungry Poet!! Will do reviews!! <3
Bump!
Nov 15, 2010 -
Re: To Save a Life
Well, this is an older write of mine, I was looking over it and jsut thought to add some stuff. I still thing it needs more work though. Tell me ...
Nov 15, 2010
