SilentRain

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Hello, Rain here. It's a claustrophobic N ight with a suffocated A ir.

Hello agian!! I have another poem for you, Thanks!! ~Rain~

Hello agian!! I have another poem for you ~Rain~

Hello! This is a poem Thanks, ~Rain~

Hello, Poem Thanks! ~Rain~

So, I had the first stanza just sitting around for a really long time. I looked at it and just started typing, trying to get something out. I ended up ...

Hello, sorr it took me so long to get here. Thanksgiving week and all made it hard for me to get to anything on the computer... So, I like this, ...

Hello agian! Me agian! Another poem. Thanks, ~Rain~

Hello agian! Tis me agian! Another poem Thanks! ~Rain~

Hello!! Rain here!! Well, I really liked this! It was really good, the rhyme was great, not really forced at all. The poem flowed really good at the beginning, got ...

Hello!! Rain here!! So, I really liked this poem, it is well written and the structure is good. It flows quite nicely and the theme is a good one. So, ...

Hello!! Rain here!! So my main criteque on this is that it is not structured like a poem. Just because it is a naritive poem doesn't mean that it needs ...

So, for all thoughs people that hate sad "emo" poems, this isn't one, just keep reading, you'll see. Just wrote this, not sure about the ending. What do you think?? ...

Hello!! Rain here!! So, I liked this poem, I liked the idea of it, and the way you brought it across was good. But it lacked flow. A lot of ...