SilentRain

Welcome!!!! This is a great site to imporve you work!! If you ever have a poem you want to have reviewed, just PM me!! I found this site through Google ...

Hay, I'm Rain, I'm a poet, this is my first attemp at writing a novel. This is the Prologue... Thanks, ~Rain~

Hello, so, this is my first attemp at writing a novel, so far all I have is the prologue and I wrote that today, I wrote it and then edited ...

Hello Skins! Rain again, but this time, I have a Prologue for you to review... Tell me what you think. Thanks, ~Rain~

This is my first attemp to write a novel, this is the Prologue. I don't have a title yet. So, I'm not sure how great this is, I had a ...

Hello!! I'm Rain! This is a poem Thanks, ~Rain~

Me agian! I have another poem for you, Its called, Letters to the Dead Thanks ~Rain~

Hello again!! This is another poem, Called Letters to the Dead Kinda sounds like the first request does it not? No well, Thanks in advance, ~Rain~

Wrote this in like, three minutes. I edited it a little, but not much... What do you thing??? Dear Jane, Everyday, you die a thousand times, when I realize, for ...

Why hello there Cool Person!!! Welcome to YWS!!!!! You will love it here!! ~Rain~

Hello!! Rain here, Sorry it took such a long time to get to this. Well, the only problem that I really have is the structure. you have each sentance as ...

Well, I guess I'm the first to ask for a review, Well, this --> Is a poem. Thanks ~Rain~

Hey! Think you could review this?? Thanks! ~Rain~

So, this is my first attemp at writing a humorous poem... I know that limerick are funny poems, so, I wrote one of those... I don't really know how funny ...

Hello!! Rain here!! So, I rally have nothing to comment on about the poem itself, mainly because I think it is really good, but the structure, i think, need some ...