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Re: Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?
Hello!! So, you don't have to do this, it is a collection of poems I am considering sumiting to the YWLJ... Click on the link for more details... Thanks, ~Rain~
Dec 13, 2010 -
Re: Your request makes me so happy!
Hello!! So, you don't have to do this, it is a collection of poems I am considering sumiting to the YWLJ... Click on the link for more details... Thanks, ~Rain~
Dec 13, 2010 -
Re: Lava's Volcano [Active]
Hello!! So, you don't have to do this, it is a collection of poems I am considering sumiting to the YWLJ... Click on the link for more details... Thanks, ~Rain~
Dec 13, 2010 -
Re: going to try to stay open for a bit longer this time.
Hello!! So, you don't have to do this, it is a collection of poems I am considering sumiting to the YWLJ... Click on the link for more details... Thanks, ~Rain~
Dec 13, 2010 -
Re: RAWR!...Ahem. Would You Like A Review? (CLOSED)
Hello!! So, you don't have to do this, it is a collection of poems I am considering sumiting to the YWLJ... Click on the link for more details... Thanks, ~Rain~
Dec 13, 2010 -
Re: The OtherWorld Prolouge *Attempt Two*
Passage from, The History of the OtherWorld The OtherWorld is a universe parallel to the one where Earth circles the Sun. It exists on a different plane. In the OtherWorld, ...
Dec 13, 2010 -
Re: Hungry Poet!! Will do reviews!! <3
Done!
Dec 13, 2010 -
Re: I Need to Review you! Puh-lease? O_o (OPEN)
Hello, you don't have to do this if you don't have enough time, or done feel like it. This is a collection of poems I'm considering entering into the YWLJ... ...
Dec 10, 2010 -
Re: Stars sequence. *Reviews really needed*
Hello!! Rain here!! So, I will review the first one first. Red - Grammer mistakes Blue - Things I think you should change to make the poem better, in my ...
Dec 9, 2010 -
Re: My Soul To Take
Hello!! So, I think this is a really good emotional poem. The ryme is good, it may be better is you had a set rhyme scheme though. Like have the ...
Dec 9, 2010 -
Re: A Sunrise for God *Edit*
Hello!! Rain here! Well, I'd like to see the original version... So, I like this, I like the first and seconf stanzas, the thrid doesn't seem to fit though... I ...
Dec 9, 2010 -
Re: Writer's Block
Hello, Rain here!! So, this is really basic, it can be good, if you work on it, but as is, it is just to basic. You really don't give us ...
Dec 9, 2010 -
Re: Lone Sullen
Hello!!! This is good, I think you should add more onto it though. I lie in wait,
Dec 9, 2010 -
Re: Blank Page
I really like this poem, it is really good. Red - Grammer mistakes Blue - Things I think you should change to make the poem better, in my opinion, or ...
Dec 9, 2010 -
Re: Young Writers Literary Journal 2011 Please Help!
So, I really want to find one of my poems to enter the YWLJ 2011, but I need help. Below are links to a few of my poems that I ...
Dec 9, 2010