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SilentRain

  • WRFF Archive Re: Hungry Poet!! Will do reviews!! <3

    Anyone!?!?!?! :?:

    Aug 22, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Strewberries with Cream

    Thanks to you all that reviewed...:) ~Rain~

    Aug 22, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Never let music die

    I have done this so many times, some times I just wish I could get up a scream at them! I like the poem though I think you could make ...

    Aug 21, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Poetry is... v.2

    Truthfully, I liked the other versing of the poem better. In this it seems as if you are just taking questions and answering then, trying to get people to understand ...

    Aug 20, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Feelings for a Friend

    Ok, here is how I think you should break it up... Ever have a friend who you thought you could trust? Who you thought would never embarass you? < right ...

    Aug 20, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Strewberries with Cream

    Strawberries with cream melt in my mouth as memories come back to me of a different time. When a smile was a smile and a hug was full of love. ...

    Aug 20, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: All I see is broken...

    Wow, I really like this. It makes me smile to think imagine someone reading a sad poem and wanting reach out and try to comfort the writer... I agree with ...

    Aug 20, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Those I cannot Save

    I Love this poem, it is so sad, really deep, and full of emotion, which are my favorite poems! I wonder what made you write this? Is there a loved ...

    Aug 20, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Time Continues On

    I like this poem, a lot! I like the first and third stanzas the best. I like that the first staza talks about life will end and yet time will ...

    Aug 20, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: Hungry Poet!! Will do reviews!! <3

    I will review any poem that I am asked to... I do my comments in colors so it is easy to understand. Red - Grammer mistakes Blue - Things I ...

    Aug 20, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: free reviews all around

    Hi, if you wouldn't mind, please review this poem for me... Thanks! ~Rain~

    Aug 20, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: If I fall, will you catch me?

    I like this poem, but I do have a few suggestions... If I fall, will you catch me? If I trip, will you help me up? If I stumble, will ...

    Aug 20, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: The Insomniacs Dream

    I've kinda had this sitting around waiting to be finished for a while and just finished it, so, tell me what you think... In dreams of peaceful slumber you're floating ...

    Aug 20, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: When the world finally goes silent

    Just a quick review... I really really really love the first verse The philosopher has lost his mind, The artist has lost his brush, The poet has lost his pencil, ...

    Aug 20, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Dreams

    Midnight wonders Deep within a dream Fading in Fading out But always nestled against a dream Dreams of peace Of first loves bliss softly spoken whispers love poems read aloud ...

    Aug 17, 2010


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