SilentRain

So i just wrote this and did very little editing... Rain drops fall outside my open window their pitter patter a lovely song I love the rain as it soaks ...

Hello! This is the first review I've done in a while so lets hope it good!! So, I like his, it is very creative in how you bring the subject ...

The first time I saw him, I was the new girl, shy and quiet, sitting alone at a table in the library. He must have saw me, and saw something ...

Hello, this is the poem I'm entering into the YWS Literary journal, I really need to have a good review on the puncuationand anything else thats needs to be fixed. ...

Hello agian Skins, this is the poem I'm entering into the YWS Literary journal, I really need to have a review on the puncuation and anything else thats needs to ...

Hello, this is the poem I'm entering into the YWS Literary journal, I really need to have a good review on the puncuationand anything else thats needs to be fixed. ...

I see her face in the mist rising from the splash of the waves. Its her, a memory from a not so distant past, she’s dancing in the waves, begging ...

Hello Hello, sorry it took me so long to get to this, I have not been able to get on the computer. So, I looked at this a little while ...

You know, I gazed at the clouds and just thought- A cloud never look at another, and says “Your too fat!” And then drifts away. No, the clouds all float ...

Well, I think first of with this you need to put it into proper lines and stanzas... At first you had it in lines, but then just wrote it like ...

Hello, this is my second attemp on the Prolouge of my first novel... Thanks, ~Rain~

Hello!! This is my second attemp of the Prolouge for my fisrt noval... Its a fantasy/adventure noval... Thanks, ~Rain~

Hello!! Rain here!! So, I really like this poem, it was really good, I like the beginning the best though. Faded eyes And stormy skies, Lowly shadows, And twisted lies. ...

Hello!! Rain here!! So, I really liked the beginning, the middle and end didn't flow as good, but were still good. I think you should change all the "I am"s ...

Sad... Oh, and, I'm not sure if this is considered poetry... ~Rain~