SilentRain

This is another older poem, I'm posting it to see what needs done, please comment!!! I’m twisting and turning, in hatred and blame. I’m dancing with an unlikely prince, of ...

Hay! Me agian... I edited that poem you review, and was wondering if you would review it as well... here is the link, Thanks, ~Rain~

This is the original... Which one is better?? Midnight wonders deep within a dream. Fading in, fading out, but always nestled against a dream. Dreams of peace. Of first loves ...

I have posted a thread to review, but no one has responded... what do I do???

Wow, Just Wow... Okay, while reading this, I began to thing "this is nice, a poem about a beautiful butterfly that will have its beauty fade it in time of ...

Wow, I really like this poem. The rhyme scheme is great, makes it read nicely and flow wonderfully. Would you be scared if you knew there was nothing after life? ...

Thanks for the review, recently I have been posting older work to try to see what needs to be changed to improve, or if they are good the way they ...

When I look in the mirror What do I see A girl looking back That can not be me Her skin is too pale Her face is empty Her eyes ...

Hello! I really like this poem! The only thing wrong I could find is a few comas that don't need to be there... The image they see , is not ...

Ok, you do NOT need those comas... When you are putting a coma in your wrote read though it and when you see a coma, you pause briefly, if the ...

I like this, its straightforward and easy to read. I also think that you should add more of what you feel to this... Like how it felt to burn, how ...

Hi! Here's a poem for you to review!! Thanks, ~Rain~

Things aren’t the same, my happy days are fleeting, my sad days on the rise. One day of joy, Equals 10 of sorrow. Life’s just not the same. The sun ...

Hello, do you think you could review this poem for me? Thnak you, ~Rain~

I like this but I also think that you write more, the end just doesn't seem like the end... Now I don’t have a heart to give away That is ...