SilentRain

This is nice, simple and nice. Your lips of fire- lips of passion On the lips of mine; Blazing. You use "lips here in every line but the last, try ...

Hello, I like this poem, the way you right it is good, though there are a few things I have to suggest: Without a second thought my routine I will ...

Wow, this is kinda intresting to say the least... I laughed, I bawled You choked, and stalled, I waved my hand up, I couldn’t breathe- I like these lines, though ...

Well, I've need review pictures before but... here goes #1- She looks confused... and she really doesn't belong, her outfit is kinda city-ish and she is out in the woods ...

Hay!! Please sir... review this poem... Thanks!!

Hay!! Reveiw this, it a poem- Thanks!!!

I'm still working on this but I'm stuck... Tell me what you think of it so far... My lips are chapped red and swollen but I don’t care lets keep ...

Hello, This is a nice poem, short and sweet and worded nicely... there is honestly nothing about this poem that I would change, it is very well writen... You will ...

Well, try this, it is a poem...

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Thanks for requseting a review! Fisrt off I'd like to say that I really liked this poem, normally a poem like this would come off as nothing but meaningless rambles, ...

Thanks for requesting a review! Okay, just going to start by saying that this poem made me cry... Just saying... Okay, so, here goes, Sleep evades me as I replay ...

Thanks for requesting a review! I liked this poem, it was pretty good, could use some work though... The blank paper, white, a relief. Blue lines crisp and clear. I ...

Thanks for requesting a review! So, I'm not sure I like this poem, it has a good theme, and it is worded nicely, but it seems kinda like it needs ...

Thanks for requesting a review! First off, the poem is okay, it could use some work, but it is okay... So, this poem is original, and I'm glad you gave ...