SilentRain

Ok, wow, I really hope I don't sound mean... So, first of, I found so many things wrong with this I didn't even finesh yet, I will read it as ...

Okay, this is my second shoot at reviewing this... I first one wouldn't post and I had to restart my computer... Hello, and welcome to YWS! I have a tendency ...

This is good, I got the feeling that you were tryinh to protray here... I do have a few suggestions though... I'm left behind , As you move on ,

Aww!! I like this poem! Its so sweet! I think though that you should state who "she" is. I'm not going to stand here and watch you burn

I really liked this poem, I didn't really expect that by reading the title. Fairground rides make broken hearts, or so I have come to believe. Toffee apples and candyfloss ...

Hello! I like this poem a lot, it is nicely written and sweet and simple... Go one or two things to say though... Same with the plants, the bees and ...

Well, This is Rain here, I don't comment photoagraphy much but Im going to give it a shot here... #1- I like this one, other then the top left and ...

I liked this... I kinda like the title. If it weren't for the title I would have no clue what this was about. Or I would have to guess... There ...

Hi! Please reveiw my poem?? Thanks!

Oh, I love this!!! Some times I find that a unedited three minate write is better then a write that took forever and had everything thought over and planned out... ...

I like it, its cool looking, you can tell its edited, but that is a gimme. It looks like she's holding light in her hands! Thats pretty cool, when ever ...

Well, I liked this, but I think it needs work... I remember when we would run into the forest, the memories . Because he gave up. Now I am stuck ...

Well, I don't know what to say... The poem has a good theme, but you didn't carry it out... and this is were I pick it apart... My world is ...

Wow, this is great, just great! I love the last lines, mainly the last. you may consider adding to it, now it is short and sweet, but if you added ...

Please review this poem for me, topic69218.html Its a poem...