SilentRain

Wow, this is a wonderful poem! It is written very well, the flow gets rocky sometimes, but, oh well... I'm sorry for what had happened, I can't really relate to ...

Well, I like the words and the theme, but the way you wrote this is just all out of whack. You have long lines and short lines and really long ...

Hello agian! Would you mind reviewing this poem for me? Thanks

Hello! Please review this poem for me... Thanks!

Hello agian!! Well, you reviewed the first form of this poem, so I hope you will also review the edited one... Here it is! Thanks!

Well, this is a great start. In the rest of the poem, like has been stated, add more imagery. The title is very chilced though so you might want to ...

Anyone out there?!?!

At first, I was thinking that there might be a lot to change, but now I don't think do... I do have a few things thought... He fidgets in the ...

Hello, so, I like the theme. The poem isn't that bad but there are some things you should work on... You asked me why I never cried, when I saw ...

Okay, this is an edited version, before you read this chick the link and read the origanal, tell me with is bette and if it improved... My lips are chapped ...

Well, thatnks for telling me that, I think it did clear thing up a bit... ~Rain~

Hello! I really like this poem , I don't really have anything to say other then that it is great! Although, I didn't like the last two lines, to me ...

Hello! Me agian! I liked your reviews so thought I'd ask you to review another poem of mine...

Hello! If oyu would please review this poem for me, I would like you to tell me EXACTLY what you think, done hold back, you wont hurt my feelings... (much) ...

Okay, so, I just wrote this, it is 12:07, I wrote it in about 7-8-9 minutes, and I didn't edit it at all... So please, tell me what you think! ...