SilentRain

Well, I like this poem a lot, just go a feww suggestions... So when it started to fly away, I came too.

Wow, I like this, I really haven't got anything to say that you need to change most of it was intinsional I believe... other then this "Pin-pricks of stars are ...

Well, I really really like this poem! I love the disctipsions, They sing to each other With scratchy paper voices, They sing each other to sleep. This is my favorite ...

Hello, this is a poem. I guess it would fall Horror... well here it is... Thanks a bunch, ~Rain~

Hello agian!! This is a poem I would like for you to review Thanks, ~Rain~

All done! Whos next?!?! Oh, and does anyone know what happend to the Spell Check button???

Ok, so, I have a habit of picking abart a poem so get ready... Frist of I have to say that I really liked this poem, I haven't read anyother ...

I wrote this awhile ago, theres a few bugs still in it though... Look at me, Daddy look what I did. I painted a picture. I painted it red. Daddy? ...

Well, this is like a lot of poems I have read... You should add more about why you feel this way, what made you feel this way, what was done, ...

Hmmm, I like this, its unusual... Just a few comments and suggestions, (no spell cheak, sorry). I wish that I could touch your face, or smell you r lush brown ...

Hello! Please reveiw this poem for me, Thanks ~Rain~

Why hello there! :twisted: Please review trhis poem for me, Thanks :smt003 ~Rain~

Hello, If your not to busy, would you review this poem for me?? If you take a while, thats ok... Thanks!! ~Rain~

Done!! Anyone else???

Dreams of falling angels wings burning blood red tears dripping falling into hell white light turns to black Where there was once life is now a lifeless nothing monsters hide ...