SilentRain

Hello hello, I haven't asked you for a review yet soo, Here you go! Its a poem, thanks!! ~Rain~

Hello!!! Welcome to this fine place of writing!!! HAY!! Your sign thing is like mine! lolz :)

Show who ever you like, thats ok:) ~Rain~

Well hello agian! Got anoter poem for you here Thanks ~Rain~

Hello, this is an older poem I wish to have reviewed, Thanks ~Rain~

Well thank you, I wrote this awhile ago; I'm trying to revise old work that can be saved, lolz ~Rain~

I’ll march out of darkness with my head held high. I’ll march out of darkness with my eyes to the sky… I’ll come out of shadows and bare my scars ...

Done, sorry it wasn't more... Anyone else?? ~Rain~

Well, I really enjoyed this poem! For a first atempt at this style you have done very well... The subject of the poem, and the way you used personification to ...

Hello, me agian, this is another poem I'd like for you to review... Thanks, ~Rain~

Hello agian! this is another poem, Thanks ~Rain~

Well, here's my review! 1)Great picture, great colors, its drawn very well... Perfect!! 2)I like this one a lot but theres just something about the face that a little off... ...

I have that happen to me some times, I'm lying awake awake in the middle of the night and BAM! a poem hits me:) Ok, so I like this poem. ...

Now I have checked it and they are all 5, 7, 5 syllables. Ok, so first I will say this, the syllables aren't all right... Whispering winds speak With sweet ...

I like this, it is short and yo make your point, I do hve a few things to say though... The Lord above created you for me to love .