SilentRain

Another older work... What do you think?? We paint our skins beautiful with arts of ink rings and studs We paint our outside beautiful with make-up and hair dye clothes ...

Done with that! Now, who is gonna feed me next???? ~Rain~

Hi, This is Rain, so, I like this, Here are my nik-picks: She let him be her escape , from all the pain and grief . L et his comforting ...

This is a really old poem, not sure if I should change it or not... Rain drops there falling I can hear them Oh, I wish I could see them ...

Well, I really like this. I just don't think that it sounds good with all the "but I love you"s at the end of every line, maybe at the end ...

Welcome!! I hope you like the site!! ~Rain~

Ok,I didn't read all the posts, so, if this was already asked, sorry for wasting your time... What happened to the spell check??? I NEED IT!!!! ~Rain~

Hello here Lumi! Got a poem here for you to review, Have at it!! ~Rain~

Bump-ity Bump Bump Bump!!! :) I'm starving over here!!! FEED ME!!!!!!!!! Please??? ~Rain~

Hello, please review this for me, If theres spelling mistakes its because I still can't find my spell cheak button...

Another old poem of mine... When you’re here I feel alive so happy to be by your side or in your arms your so alive so fun and free Ocean ...

Thanks for all the great reviews!!

This is an antithesis, it compares two differant ideas, to mean one over all thing in the end... I used "This Love" as a way to say something like "This ...

Yes, I know this poem has a LOT a repitision... Reveiws please, good or bad, I like the, all! This love is never spoken this love leaves me broken this ...

Thank you both, I see what you mean though, about the sentances... ~Rain~