SilentRain

Hello!! Me Here Poem for you to reveiw, ~Rain~

All done!! Who's next to try to feed the starving poet??

Hi!! > Welcome to this wonderful place!! YWS Is a great place for writers! Have fun! I'm in a good mood today, hence all the "!!!!!"s :smt003 ~Rain~

And agian, like many others, this is an old work... I’m tripping, falling, crashing, burning into ashes, black as night. All alone, nowhere to go, nowhere to hide from the ...

Hello! Here as promised!! Ok, so, this s like a situation I'm caught in right now acculy... Okay, so, to business! First of, I like the theme, I like how ...

Ok so, first off, this seemed like a varitiy of other poems that I have read... Most of the lines said things I've heard many many times before. The lines ...

Wow, the way you made the whole poem to come back to the red silk noose is wonderful. This poem has some good imagry as well, which makes up the ...

Hello, Rain hear, I don't know, I kind off like this. If you wrote more to it, I'm sure this would be a pretty good poem. Now its good, I ...

I’ve been broken I’ve been beaten I’ve been left bruised and bleeding this pain is yet another hurt another strife another tear to fall I’ve seen dark waters dancing in ...

Hi, I'm Rain! This is a poem, do a good review and I will post here all the time! ~Rain~

Hello agian! Another poem Thanks ~Rain~

Hello! This is a poem, Thanks, ~Rain~

All done!! Still hungry though!!! ~Rain~

Hello!! Well, I really like this. I think the best thing you can do though is make it longer. Two or three stanza's more will make this so great. The ...

Hiya, This is a poem Title: Beautiful Inside, Ugly outside Genre:I really can't discribe it... Thanks, ~Rain~