SilentRain

Wrote this awhile ago... What do you think?? Recover your life, stand up and fight. Let go of the past. Take the steps to get to the future, one by ...

Done! Ok, I will still do any poem requested, but most likely I if you request on a weekend I won't do it untill monday... ~Rain~

Hello, here at last, sorry it took so long. So here are my nit picks: The words register , for the thousandth time , in a mind where they are ...

Hello, sorry it took so long for me to get to this, I've been busy, but here I am. First off, I really liked this, it is a pretty well ...

Hello! Poem for you to review! Thanks, ~Rain~

Hello!! So, I really liked this, I found it had a nice flow and it never once seemed tedeous or anything of that nature. So, here are my little nit- ...

Hello! Sorry it has taken so long for me to get to this. Well, here goes-- So, I like all the metophors, I like the theme, and how you wrote ...

Hear my words, and run away. Don’t trust the shadows, and never stray. The monster will take you up, and make you his toy, a mindless puppet, and never again ...

Wow, that is all I have to say about this. Wow! This is a wonderful poem! wish I could say more, but I am stumpled! This is by far one ...

Looking over this now, the simicolons bug me... I'm gonna change those now. Well, thats for all the help!! ~Rain~

Hello. this is a poem, Thanks, ~Rain~

Ok, so, I just wrote this. It is like, the first poem I've written in about a month... I'm not sure about the title or the end, so please tell ...

Done! :smt003 Next?? Still hungry here (its a wonder I'm not fat!) ~Rain~

Hello, this is an old poem of mine I'm working on revising. Thanks, ~Rain~ P.S. You can't have my soul. (Jesus already has it)

Hello agian! So, to start of, there are many things I like about this, and also many things I think can be chaged to make this better... So, here goes, ...