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Re: I wish the words would come.
Hello, I'm really sorry I didn't get this done until now... So, mainly the only think I find really wrong with this is that it really needs more imagry or ...
Nov 9, 2010 -
Re: remember when...
Hello, so, first off, you need to capitolize "Remember When" In your title... So, here are my nit-picks... I wont piont out the caps errors, someone already has... I wont ...
Nov 3, 2010 -
Re: Games
Hello, Rain here, it makes sence. Ok, so, the main thing I think should be done to this poem to make it better it to add metaphors or similies, to ...
Nov 3, 2010 -
Re: Hungry Poet!! Will do reviews!! <3
Hello! Starving poet here!!! ~Rain~
Nov 3, 2010 -
Re: Buried
Hello, Rain here, so I aposlutly LOVE this poem! It is so great! The theme was really good and it was really nicely written. I think you need to go ...
Nov 3, 2010 -
Re: My Love Song! (Not what think)
Well, this just came completly out of the blue... I LOVE IT!!! What do you think??? Didn't edit at all, wrote it in like, 10 mins... Hello my loves. My ...
Nov 3, 2010 -
Re: Line Of Fate
Hello, so, for a first attempt at poetry, this is good. Well, I have a habit a nit-picking apart a poem so, here goes: Walking down the line What's gonna ...
Nov 3, 2010 -
Re: This One's for You
This has just been sitting arounf waiting to be fineshed for awhile, not to sure I like how it came out, any suggestions?? This ones for the kids, that never ...
Nov 3, 2010 -
Re: My England
Hello, Rain here, I really liked this, I do have a few comments and suggestions though. Red- Needs to be changed to be grammerly correct. Blue- Suggestions based on my ...
Nov 2, 2010 -
Re: Ruined My Life
Hello, I'm Rain, so here is what I have to say: Why do I do this to myself? I'm causing myself my own pain.
Nov 2, 2010 -
Re: Will review almost anything!
Hello, you didn't say if you review poetry, but if you do, here, If not, please PM me... If you do review, this doesn't ahve a title, mind suggesting one? ...
Nov 2, 2010 -
Re: Your request makes me so happy!
Hello, This is a poem It doesn't have a title This you could make a suggestion?? Thanks, ~Rain~
Nov 1, 2010 -
Re: I Need to Review you! Puh-lease? O_o (OPEN)
Hello agian!!! This is another one of my poems, It doesn't have a title yet, think you could suggest one?? Thanks, ~Rain~
Nov 1, 2010 -
Re: Working on Reviewer II, please help me....
Hello! This is another poem, It doesn't have a title yet, think oyu could suggest one?? thank! ~Rain~
Nov 1, 2010 -
Re: In Silence Sin Speaks the Loudest
Just wrote this, only edited a little, I think its kinda long, but Im not sure if thats good or bad... Tell me what you think! They're screaming words that ...
Nov 1, 2010