SilentRain

Hello!! Nice poem! One think to say though, in the second stanza, your first two lines don't rhyme. Otherwise this was a great poem, the flow did get alittle rock ...

Another old write. I have no name I am but a ghost For no one see's me Even as I lie here Among the crowds I see the faces Drifting ...

Well, hello! Hello!! Hello!!! I'm Rain, a poet here, I've only been wrting for about tree years, so I guess I'm a rookie too. :) Welcome! Hope you enjoy this ...

Hello! Hello!! Hello!!! Hello!!!! How are you? I'm Rain, I'm a poet here. Welcome! You'll love it here!!! I do! Hope you enjoy YWS!! ~Rain~ P.S. I'm in an "!!!!!" ...

Hello! It's me! Rain! With a poem for you to review! Thanks! Bye~

Hello agian my friend Skins! Another poem here for you to review! Thanks so much! Bye! ~Rain~

So, this is my first atempt at Narrative Poetry... I'm not sure how it is but, I like it... I don't really like the ending, but that might jsut be ...

Hello LoveBug! Ok, just because I'm your sister doesn't mean I'm going to go easy on you... So... Here you go: I think it was ok, could use some work, ...

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Hello! This is Rain This is a poem and this is its name- Dark and this--> is me saying thank you Thanks!! ~Rain~ And now good-bye!

Well, I just want to say that I found this simply beautiful... I just loved it... The only thing I have to say is that the "wild" in the last ...

Hello, Hello, Hello, and Hello one last time! Ok, so this is a poem, Thanks! ~Rain~

Hello, Hello! Ok, so... Poem Name- Dark Link- Be as harsh as you see fit... ~Rain~

So, most of you on here have already read a lot of my poems. Well, this is the very first poem I ever wrote. I wrote it from a school ...

Welcome to YWS my LoveBug! Good poem. Just call me if you need any help with anything! Your loving and inspiring big sister, ~Rain~